Today I have done another activity called magnetic poem. A magnetic poem is a type of poetry that was invented by Dave Capell who could not think of what to write for a song, so he put down interesting words on paper and rearranged them to make a song, which was really good fun so he decided to make magnetic poetry to share with other people.
For this activity my topic about summer was the beach, the reason why I chose this topic was because there were many words that were on the sides of the google drawing that I could write about the beach.
I enjoyed doing this activity because I was able to write my own magnetic poem.
Kia Ora
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WOW!!!Ka mau te wehi! It looks amazing!! You have chosen such power, strong and positive words to describe summer. It was GREAT!! To see that you read your poem out loud. You spoke very clearly and you were really focused on reading the poem. It was also wonderful to see that you explained the task to your fellow bloggers. It is great to see you engaging with the SLJ activities and I can see that you have developed your understanding of poetry.
Don't forget to enter it in the slam using this form using this form Then you can visit this site to comment on other students' poems.
Keep up the Super work we look forward to your next blog post!!!
Have a Super Summer!!!
Ngā mihi,
Quein
Kia ora Chisa. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. I like the way you shared a visual of your poem as well as a recording of you reading it. I also love the idea of the seagulls waiting patiently because they know people will leave food. Remember you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Chisa!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Charlotte and I am from the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey team!
This poem is beautiful! It is so descriptive and filled with a lot of imagery, so the readers can picture it perfectly! Ka pai! Do you enjoy writing stories and poems?
Your reading of your poem was superb. You have a strong, clear, confident voice! I bet you’re awesome at speeches at school?!
Pai mahi on including some information about magnetic poems in your blog post! That is super helpful for anyone who wants to learn more about what you did!
Keep up the awesome mahi, Chisa!!
Ngā mihi nui,
Charlotte :)